Wow, Great speech Maranita on Henry Ford. I love how you described why he was your role model and what he did. I have learnt a lot from your speech and it is very spectacular and interesting. My concern was, that when i was reading I spotted lots of mistakes. Some words were left out, you did not put spaces and you did some twice, some did not make sense and you repeated a line. Next time please check your work before posting but apart from your mistakes I loved every single bit about your speech (Henry Ford).
Hi Maranita, I like the way you wrote about Henry Ford. This speech was fabulous and great to read. It hooked me in when I read it. Next time, you should make the writing bigger so I can see it properly. Other than that, Well done!!!!
Wow, Great speech Maranita on Henry Ford. I love how you described why he was your role model and what he did. I have learnt a lot from your speech and it is very spectacular and interesting. My concern was, that when i was reading I spotted lots of mistakes. Some words were left out, you did not put spaces and you did some twice, some did not make sense and you repeated a line. Next time please check your work before posting but apart from your mistakes I loved every single bit about your speech (Henry Ford).
ReplyDeleteThnx AJ for your comment and thank you for telling me to re-do my work. Thnx again!
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you wrote about Henry Ford. This speech was fabulous and great to read. It hooked me in when I read it. Next time, you should make the writing bigger so I can see it properly. Other than that, Well done!!!!
From your neighbour, Amy
Aww! Thank you Amy for your nice comment. Well done to you too!!!
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